Kenneth, Thank you for your interest. One place to start is Harry M. Orlinsky, Notes on the New Translation of the Torah. Philadelphia: The Jewish
Publication Society of America, 1969.
It deals with only one English-language version, the New JPS translation, but does cover the Torah. It constitutes an illuminating introduction to how at least some Jewish translators dealt with some difficulties in translation. After you have looked it over, please feel free to let me know if it's been helpful.
Kenneth, Thank you for your interest. One place to start is Harry M. Orlinsky, Notes on the New Translation of the Torah. Philadelphia: The Jewish
Publication Society of America, 1969.
It deals with only one English-language version, the New JPS translation, but does cover the Torah. It constitutes an illuminating introduction to how at least some Jewish translators dealt with some difficulties in translation. After you have looked it over, please feel free to let me know if it's been helpful.